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Courtesy to Natalia Nail for image from Pixabay

Written 10 February 2025

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Writing Prompts 16 Lines or Less Poetry Contest

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Sand Promises

“Just as these grains of sand can never be separated and poured again into their individual containers, so will your marriage be." Unknown
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                                            Sand Promises

                            In a shrine amidst relatives and friends
                       We pour sands in a silver plate of our dreams
                                Making promises to be as one man,
                           Whether in wintry gales or summer beams.

                         As the coloured sands blend and are entwined,
                             We promise, with the fire as eye witness,
                            To pursue our life`s journey with one mind
                               And reach our shared destiny in finesse.

                              It`s a promise to build our home of love
                           On the rocks of trust with the sands of hope
                              And the flame of faith flaring from above
                            To guide our path when treading a tightrope.

                          Two folks with our souls blended and entwined
                          We`re now geared up in life`s journey to shine.
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March 2, 2025 at 4:39 AM
unique thought. congratulations on your win dear poet. cheers!!!
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March 2, 2025 at 7:59 AM
Thanks a lot dear poet for visiting my page and for appreciating the above poem. Wish you a pleasant thoughtful day.
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