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Sand Promises

Those were times when I believed everything. You seemed to me a treasure of delight. Your presence, for me, was a blissful spring Often amidst rainbow clouds, I took flight. I said I'd bring you the sun, moon, and stars. You said you'd lull me in your long love waves Your fancies filled my passion's empty jars To our mirages had we become slaves? Were your toothpaste smiles splashy soap bubbles? Were those goody-goody words bright balloons? Did you think too that I'd end your troubles? We couldn't dance to each other's tunes. Our promises had been castles on sand. Realizing, let's now walk hand in hand.

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