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Sand promises

“Thousands of desperate migrants die in the desert and at sea, or fall victim to murderers and kidnappers, as they make their way along the ‘eastern corridor’ from Ethiopia to Saudi Arabia” - Fred Harter in Obock, Djibouti ------------------------------------------------------ Ethiopia through Djibouti to Yemen, to hopeful life runs Sun's angry route A glum path to escape poverty impulsive one-way journey fear strengthens patience keepers turned exploiters to smugglers dump or sell or kill their dreams new brokers fill hopes shifting sand promises shift their goals 'Selling hair to purchase a comb' no turning now, walk starved, extorted, violated, yet hearsays goad guileless hearts burying truth, lies march

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Miranda Hawley

Date: 3/3/2025 6:31:00 PM

Your poem could be titled sand nightmares, because how sad all this is. For example, your line at the end of the first stanza of this poem just sounds ominous. From where I live in the US all I can do is pray for those people, pray for mercy and peace for them.

thriveni c mysore
Date: 3/3/2025 8:26:00 PM

It is a matter of choosing between devil and deep sea, nothing stops these people to embark on a journey in search of a life, just the dignity of life. they go through so much hardships yet I was surprised to read about their unmoving faith to make it against all odds. I am so very grateful to you for this kind visit dear friend, Yes we can pray for them and also be thankful to Lord for our good fortune of living in dignity. Your mere visit made my day, thank you.

John Read

Date: 2/8/2025 7:45:00 AM

Sadly I cannot see a end to all this madness, those seeking a better life will always be exploited by smugglers.

thriveni c mysore
Date: 2/8/2025 8:05:00 PM

'madness' it is as you say dear poet. No one can help. one has to swim this life along such (many) murky waters and reach one's shores. Thank you for your kind visit and time dear poet. Blessings

Joe Maverick

Date: 2/8/2025 12:42:00 AM

Its all there Thriveni.. And so much courtesy of bush and blair..On the oders of the w e f of course.' Murder and mass migration as Gad daffi reckoned.'

thriveni c mysore
Date: 2/8/2025 5:24:00 AM

Thank you for your kind visit dear poet. yes unquestionable orders unanswerable decisions. I appreciate your thoughts dear poet. thank you.

Len Gasun

Date: 2/7/2025 6:13:00 AM

I'm deeply moved by this awesome verse my dear poet friend. There's nothing we can do but pray for them. Thanks for sharing this poem and your poetric talent with us my dear. I'll be back soon. God bless you always. Hugs (oh, it happens that the captcha that i'll click is PRY)

thriveni c mysore
Date: 2/7/2025 7:11:00 AM

I am ever grateful to you for your kind visit, time and generous words dear friend. Means so much to me. Thank you for the blessings dear poet. Hugs & roses too.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/5/2025 1:30:00 PM

what a powerful last line: burying truth, lies march!

thriveni c mysore
Date: 2/5/2025 9:11:00 PM

Thank you dear friend for your kind visit. Yes, I am glad I came up with that after four variations, I even thought of replacing buying but then I chose burying. You have an eye for detail. Thank you for noticing. Blessings.