Sand Is In My Eye (To Vandetta)

I still feel my life like sand through your fingers
Falling in the winds swish and rumble of the world
And in every grain of my being lingers
Still the roar of pain in the silence where I am hurled
Sand is in my eye, Each grain a different memory
Salt the tears I cry, Each pain a different history

I dreamed of you all my life, and desired that you yield
Only long enough for me to yield my all to you
But just when love rose like a Babel me, I could not seal
Your faith in simple truth, nor pride my care renew
We were as broken as a tide
Each drift of separation became more wide

Ah, but it was not you nor I at fault for fear but us
For in all the time we loved before we came to this
With only a fragment of the self and full of old dust
And broken in the place where life stores its bliss
Today I think, would I have given all before
To sit on sand and watch us united as we soar

You rushed me into it, and there my weakness began
For somehow I see in soaring birds also a dance
And every dance is perfect when led by the man.
And shall I learn again to be strong now, and find my chance
Sand is in my eye, each grain a different memory
Salt the tears I cry, each pain a different history.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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August 20, 2010 at 10:41 AM
Wow, L'nass-- I sure am glad that Deb's blog led me to you-- this just MOVED me-- what a heartbreaking write that's just written with depth and emotion-- I just truly loved how you wrote this and can only wish that I can achieve what your poems does... wow. --nikko :)
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June 4, 2010 at 4:58 AM
Very passsionate write, enjoyed! Thanks for your comments on my works and it is good to hear from you.
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June 1, 2010 at 4:22 AM
Dear L'nass ... I thought this was wonderful well done its good to be reading you all again smile love Jayne
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April 24, 2010 at 12:03 AM
you speak of musch truth in your write here. the love between two,even if the bond is a much greater force, the problem somehow, the two allow it to damage that bond, leaving it shattered, its just so sad.but when it is mended, they remember the perfection of it. wonderful write -Always&Forever Lynette
Haick Avatar
April 19, 2010 at 2:35 PM
Filled with heartfelt emotion..."And everydance is perfect when led by a man." I love this..love these sentiments as I feel the same...Audrey
Brown Avatar
April 19, 2010 at 6:45 AM
It was a pleasure to read your poetry this morning L'nass. Thank you for sharing your writing. Love, Carol
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April 18, 2010 at 6:43 PM
How sad that the love you had dreamt of all your life did not have a chance to grow and flourish. You have such an eloquent style, my friend. And your perspectives on love as well as social issues are always magnificently expressed in your words. Excellent writing! Love, Carolyn
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April 18, 2010 at 6:34 PM
a nice one, have a good one
Semeniuk Avatar
April 18, 2010 at 5:17 PM
this is a really beautiful poem you've created!..niice job as usual!
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April 18, 2010 at 5:07 PM
This poem is very emotional..and touching..excellent poem..Charma
Peat Avatar
April 18, 2010 at 4:38 PM
Nice work good on you
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