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Sand In a Bottle Art

into a tiny clear glass bottle,
about the width of a thumb,
through its narrow top,
through a long tapered neck,
he pours fine coloured sand,
from small glass tubes,
quickly shifting from
one colour to another,
the sand just rushes down,
into the bottle to take its place,
as he deftly shakes and moves
guiding a circular shower of sand!
the colours settle down,
a demonstration of precise skill,
a coordination of eye, hand and mind,
of a family tradition and gift,
a proof of what humans can do!
he puts a tiny cork to seal it all!
I look at the bottle he hands me
after dusting of the dust with a cloth,
The bottle now is a work of art,
I see the Syrian sands with palm trees,
three camels with their mounts,
a sunset and a few birds
and my name to sign it of!
his bright eyes look at me 
as if to ask if I am pleased,
he shows his fingers to say 5 dinars! 
A priceless art, for such a small price!
I give him 10 and hug him
and shake his hand,
hoping some of his skills
on me would rub off!

2nd placement
Podium placing promise(5)
Brian Strand
Written 7/Jan/2021
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Jayasankar Avatar
January 15, 2021 at 5:03 AM
Very descriptive of the lovely bottle art Krishji. Congrats on your great win ~ Ani
Radhakrishna Avatar
January 15, 2021 at 5:13 AM
Thanks Ani! It is just too good to be believed! amazing how they do it!
Balasubramanian Avatar
January 8, 2021 at 1:27 AM
This is a great write, I checked net on bottle sand art,was amazed. Great tribute to artisans. Hope government all over the world does something, otherwise traditional arts will die as they do not earn much remuneration. Have a great day ahead. Rama
Radhakrishna Avatar
January 8, 2021 at 4:13 AM
Thanks Rama! Watching them do it is just amazing! How can one have so much control over fine sand?? great skill! Thank you and best wishes!
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