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Sand Castling the Future

A magnet tumor detected 
I do elide
Stuccato thinking of castle making

Sand washes away as the ocean grows
Montrous, all consuming
They're sitting on ice cream cones
Licking crusty lips

I care not to waste away
My veins are rippled with sound
Gabriel's golden embrace descends on wings
Forever banishing the future

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 6/15/2012 11:23:00 AM
Justin, this is a favorite poem from you. Thank you. - Have a lovely weekend. - oxox love Anne-Lise
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Justin Debrosse
Date: 6/15/2012 11:43:00 AM
Thank you! Im so happy your continuously reading these
Date: 6/15/2012 11:17:00 AM
A truly meaningful piece you have penned that touches the heart.
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Justin Debrosse
Date: 6/15/2012 11:43:00 AM
Thanks so much for the feedback have a great day!

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