Sand Castles

Beachy, together, childhood days
erecting castles, made with our hands.
Endeavoring, close to our ebb
letting our waves soften our sand.
Moulding, shoulder to shoulder,  
effortlessly,  nonchalantly.

I never felt that free again,
though I did try.  Over time, 
I don’t know why, I crossed a line.
And as my castles grew in size,
incoming waves continued too,
and battered down my secrets and lies.

Today, I yearn for that beach.  To be free again,
to start over, to see my young self as I was then.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Andresen Avatar
June 5, 2013 at 5:09 AM
- Pawn of time, nice to read James. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Maharaj Avatar
June 5, 2013 at 4:26 AM
Beautiful memories turned into a beautiful poem that i can relate. :)
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