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Sand Castle

Just too close just not happy sad tears a heat wave can’t dry these wet eyes away This angry build up inside this sand castle fill with emotions Every time I build this sand castle these wave from this oceans washes it away I put a lot of time I put lot of love I built this castle with passion. So hard to let go So easily destroyed

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 9/10/2013 10:06:00 AM
This is good Chris, Nothing lasts forever. Another saying - Love can be born of nothing, but it can die of anything. Have a great day and Thanks for sharing.... Lucilla
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Date: 9/3/2013 12:56:00 PM
Nice poem, Christopher. Definitely felt the honesty of lost, enjoyable poem overall. Check out some of mine, might find some you like. Peace.
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Date: 8/28/2013 1:53:00 AM
Good poem...like to see more :) A~D
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Date: 8/26/2013 2:00:00 PM
- It's life ... well written Christopher ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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