Sand Castle

Just too close just not happy sad tears a heat wave can’t dry these wet eyes away

This angry build up inside this sand castle fill with emotions

Every time I build this sand castle these wave from this oceans washes it away

I put a lot of time I put lot of love I built this castle with passion.
                                             
                                       So hard to let go
                                                
                                        So easily destroyed
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Carrillo Avatar
September 10, 2013 at 10:06 AM
This is good Chris, Nothing lasts forever. Another saying - Love can be born of nothing, but it can die of anything. Have a great day and Thanks for sharing.... Lucilla
Clemons Avatar
September 3, 2013 at 12:56 PM
Nice poem, Christopher. Definitely felt the honesty of lost, enjoyable poem overall. Check out some of mine, might find some you like. Peace.
Danie Avatar
August 28, 2013 at 1:53 AM
Good poem...like to see more :) A~D
Andresen Avatar
August 26, 2013 at 2:00 PM
- It's life ... well written Christopher ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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