Sand Castle

Gentle sonic of piano and violin guides our
dance connected eyes in trance in stance
of love the lord smiles above connecting
our love free the doves of heaven concealing
the moment with peace my soul flares with
each step we step side to side spin and glide
tingle,melt, form and sculpt brightness in soul
and mind vanishing in rays of romance appearing
on the bay of happiness playing in the sands of
time,giggling as the tides collide before our eyes
sand castles formed in eternal connection king and
queen on sand in castle mending tender love the
castle never falls,it never fades painted in golden 
hues,when the tides come to wash it away in our
hearts it will for ever stay,every gain bonding our 
sand castle everlasting , darling bring your best 
bucket bring your best scoop we will build a city
of sand on beach as I beseech your wetness and
distract your sand castle in the making  the dawn
sets as we wet the sand we have made our sand 
castle of love.


By: Elliott Bowe

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 5/25/2012 1:12:00 PM
Oooo... such imagery.. I like it... Terry (and thanks for your kind comments)
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Date: 5/18/2012 6:17:00 PM
Congratulations on your win Elliott!! Well Done...big hugs, love ya deb
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Date: 5/18/2012 4:25:00 PM
Congratulations on your placement in Gail's "Sandcastles" contest Elliott. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/18/2012 10:58:00 AM
Congratulations Elliott xx
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Date: 5/18/2012 10:28:00 AM
Elliott congrats on your wiin..David
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Date: 5/16/2012 12:23:00 PM
You always have a way with words, Elliott. Very nice.
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Date: 5/16/2012 11:23:00 AM
enchanting read!
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