Sand

S cratchy, itchy, it gets everywhere
A las it gets in my sandwiches too.
N ext time we make love, place the blanket down there
D esigns on the beach I still have for you.

© 27/08/2013
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Carrillo Avatar
September 9, 2013 at 4:23 PM
Congratulations Mandy; Thanks for sharing This Acrostic of Sand.... Lucilla
Neels Avatar
September 8, 2013 at 11:52 AM
Mandy, I just love this! Absolutely enjoyed it tonight. Congratulations on your win as well. Hugs and love Wilma
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September 5, 2013 at 4:02 PM
congratulations.. Mandy... xxo...Linda
Kendrick Avatar
September 3, 2013 at 1:49 PM
Unique winning work..The sand on the beach does cling its in own way.Congrats on your great win..
Jones Avatar
September 1, 2013 at 3:05 PM
Ha very cute!...congratulations.. :-)
Merryman Avatar
September 1, 2013 at 2:19 PM
Mandy, congrats on your win with this humorous acrostic! Love, Kim
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September 1, 2013 at 2:06 PM
Mandy, , congratulations on your acrostic win. ~ SKAT
Adams Avatar
August 31, 2013 at 8:38 PM
nicely written....congrats on your win!
May Avatar
August 31, 2013 at 7:25 PM
congrats on your win Mandy
Horne Avatar
August 30, 2013 at 10:05 AM
LOL, trust you - thanks for a good laugh xx
Mehta Avatar
August 27, 2013 at 7:08 PM
Nice acrostic penned well
Horsman Avatar
August 27, 2013 at 8:48 AM
wow i must take up surfing, or become a lifeguard, with love abound like that on the sands of joy,, love this little poem, a sure sign of your maturity...
Bauer Avatar
August 27, 2013 at 7:22 AM
ha! you surprised me at the end. i enjoyed this one...
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