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S cratchy, itchy, it gets everywhere A las it gets in my sandwiches too. N ext time we make love, place the blanket down there D esigns on the beach I still have for you. © 27/08/2013

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Date: 9/9/2013 4:23:00 PM
Congratulations Mandy; Thanks for sharing This Acrostic of Sand.... Lucilla
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Date: 9/8/2013 11:52:00 AM
Mandy, I just love this! Absolutely enjoyed it tonight. Congratulations on your win as well. Hugs and love Wilma
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Date: 9/5/2013 4:02:00 PM
congratulations.. Mandy... xxo...Linda
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Date: 9/3/2013 1:49:00 PM
Unique winning work..The sand on the beach does cling its in own way.Congrats on your great win..
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Date: 9/1/2013 3:05:00 PM
Ha very cute!...congratulations.. :-)
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Date: 9/1/2013 2:19:00 PM
Mandy, congrats on your win with this humorous acrostic! Love, Kim
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Date: 9/1/2013 2:06:00 PM
Mandy, , congratulations on your acrostic win. ~ SKAT
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Date: 8/31/2013 8:38:00 PM
nicely written....congrats on your win!
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Date: 8/31/2013 7:25:00 PM
congrats on your win Mandy
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Date: 8/30/2013 10:05:00 AM
LOL, trust you - thanks for a good laugh xx
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Date: 8/27/2013 7:08:00 PM
Nice acrostic penned well
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Date: 8/27/2013 8:48:00 AM
wow i must take up surfing, or become a lifeguard, with love abound like that on the sands of joy,, love this little poem, a sure sign of your maturity...
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Date: 8/27/2013 7:22:00 AM
ha! you surprised me at the end. i enjoyed this one...
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