Sanctuary Found

S  S  S  S  S  S S  S  S         Surely 
A  A  A  A  A  A A  A         Arrogance has 
N  N  N  N  N  N            No foothold in heaven. 
C  C  C  C  C             Can conceit claim your favor, God?  
T  T  T                  They think You cannot see their callous hearts.  
U  U  U  U  U             Unfair! their lives are so easy.  
A  A  A  A  A A             At last, I see their end.
R  R  R  R  R  R R  R        Refuge, you are!
Y  Y  Y  Y  Y  Y Y  Y  Y         You reign!


an acrostic rictameter
inspired by Psalm 73:17
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Kendrick Avatar
August 19, 2014 at 5:21 PM
Prodigious win!!! Sara...I like this faith based one..Way to go..
Poteet Avatar
February 16, 2018 at 2:11 PM
I like it too, Sara. My faith has a basis similar to yours,I'm sure.
Dietrich Avatar
August 19, 2014 at 5:18 PM
wow, what a cool poem and format. Congrats on your win.
Lindley Avatar
August 19, 2014 at 7:58 AM
Congrats on your win and this fine write!!!
Mehta Avatar
August 19, 2014 at 5:02 AM
Lovely concrete form and amazing thought, Reason. congrats
A   Avatar
August 18, 2014 at 7:22 PM
Reason, Congratulations, on your win. Thank you for the awesome Acrostic Poem. Enjoy my blog "Dedicated to You" --and YOU" if you like. Have fun enjoying all the winning poems. Always & Forever ~LINDA~
Callus Avatar
July 24, 2014 at 2:37 PM
This is interesting. I have encountered both acrostic and rictameter forms, but this is the first time I've seen them combined. Well done, both as regards technicality and poem content. // paul
Dietrich Avatar
July 16, 2014 at 11:45 PM
I love how clearly you made it show acrostic!!! Great format and thought.
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