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Sanctuary

Alone again, alone in time, and so i sink into my mind. I chase my dreams to the unknown, where the blind eye sees and the souls are grown. I walk through a white door that leads to my heart its shattered, broken, and all torn apart. The past is an evisceration picture book written in braille, only those who wish to truly see could understand its tale. Inside the guilt of innocence the seeds of future life are sewn, and within the sins of unity the first die is cast and stone is thrown

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Date: 6/15/2010 2:35:00 AM
A very will written poem, as 'Sara' said; good use of metaphoric language. Thanks for this upload. Regards, Gavin.
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Date: 6/14/2010 9:14:00 AM
Welcome to Poetry Soup Family.. so enjoyed your creative write tonight..with luv from the "Sweetheart"
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Date: 6/14/2010 8:04:00 AM
beautiful and vivid...good write JB
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Date: 6/14/2010 5:50:00 AM
Great write ...Very good use of metaphoric language...I can feel you pain from the reading of your work..Sara
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Date: 6/14/2010 4:55:00 AM
I didn't think I'd ever see evisceration used in poetry - well done for that, a very interesting read, lost love can indeed feel like your heart is being torn out. Enjoyed it.
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