Sanctuary

we lie on our backs in the candle light
hands clasped
we watch candle-stars dance around our room
breathing slows
you smile at me and a tender kiss
of a greatful loving man
is mine
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Joseph Avatar
October 27, 2009 at 8:46 AM
thank you for your kind comments.
Brown Avatar
October 27, 2009 at 3:44 AM
Veronica, thank you for sharing your heart with us. Love, Carol
Haick Avatar
October 26, 2009 at 12:36 PM
A-a-a-h, a tender moment spent with the man you love! I enjoyed this! Thanks for sharing it Veronica! Peace and love, Audrey
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