Sanctity By the Sea

“Searching for personal exoneration, I found …”



A refuge by the sea was calling to me With dark clouds above a heart forsaking love It drew me in despite guilt and sin A sympathetic sanctuary inviting as wind behind my back biting Safe from the storms of my past solitary reflection at last Each move I make now without falter my strength is renewed at this altar I confess, I pray, I am forgiven my doubts released in this heavenly haven I rise, I turn, I walk back through its door into a sunset so serene gracing the shore Walking with lighter steps, my soul now open cleansing of spirit allows me to live and love again I look back but once to where I’ve been And see my visit with faith really came from within I reached inside myself to find harmony of both my body and mind Now I wander with belief in me thanks to my ethereal encounter by the sea
Written by Shani Fassbender For the contest "The Church by the Ocean" Date written: September 23, 2011
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Fraser Avatar
November 24, 2012 at 9:07 PM
Great imagery here Shani, savor your spiritual awakening. Blessings, Carl
Palmer Avatar
November 24, 2012 at 1:36 PM
love it great write Shani
Guzzi Avatar
November 23, 2012 at 5:06 PM
The sea sure does make you feel close to God! Light & Love
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November 22, 2012 at 4:41 PM
Shani, love the image ,,,enjoyed stopping by once again ;-)~ Hope you are having a joyous holiday. Take care ~PD
Guzzi Avatar
November 17, 2012 at 2:21 PM
..the works of mysterious ways..Light & Love
Eastman Avatar
February 13, 2012 at 8:35 AM
Magnificant write. Congratulations on your win...
Sweetheart Avatar
February 12, 2012 at 7:54 PM
missing u Shani..hope all is well and u will return soon luv..
Eastman Avatar
November 25, 2011 at 7:22 AM
Congratulations on your win. Well done!
Stinson Avatar
November 23, 2011 at 9:56 PM
Your words in this beautiful poem could renew faith. Thank you for sharing this astounding piece.
Roberts Avatar
October 6, 2011 at 9:44 PM
lovely rhyme Shani, congrats on your win
Sadberry Avatar
October 6, 2011 at 2:08 PM
Smile, *^_^* “Something About The Ocean That's Just So Soothing My Dear Precious Shaynee! *^_^* I Can Vision Your Beauty Strolling Alongst The Shore With The Wind Whispering Sweetly Unto Your Loveliness *^_^* Ahhhh ~ Beautiful Painting, My Dear!” === My Love Always, Jasper *
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October 5, 2011 at 9:26 PM
A lovely poem, Shani. Congrats on your win and thank you for your kind comments. Kim
Johnson Avatar
October 5, 2011 at 7:58 PM
A lovely poem and expression of faith. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
Sweetheart Avatar
October 5, 2011 at 5:15 PM
Congrats Shani on a wonderful well deserved win with this enchanting entry luv..
Quigley Avatar
October 5, 2011 at 10:56 AM
Beautifully written Shani. Congratulations
Lane Avatar
October 5, 2011 at 8:24 AM
Great work in the contest. Congratulations on your win.
Brown Avatar
October 4, 2011 at 1:40 PM
Congratulations on your win Shani in "The Church By The Ocean" contest. Love, Carol
Quigley Avatar
September 29, 2011 at 4:55 PM
Nice poem Shani. Good luck in the contest.
Mehta Avatar
September 29, 2011 at 12:51 PM
Congratulations onn the win in the contest of P.D., Shani
Sweetheart Avatar
September 29, 2011 at 11:37 AM
Congrats Shani on another superb win with this fantastic poetry luv..
A   Avatar
September 29, 2011 at 11:11 AM
Shani~~~Congratulations on your posted poem of the week. God bless,..p.d.
Brown Avatar
September 29, 2011 at 10:02 AM
Congratulations on your win in P.D.'s "Your Best Poem this Week" contest Shani. Love, Carol
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September 23, 2011 at 11:32 PM
Shani, This is really lovely. What a wonderful encounter by the sea it would be.
Roberts Avatar
September 23, 2011 at 8:52 PM
lovely entry Shani
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