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San Woo Where Did You Go

San Woo Where Did You Go It looks like you packed up your bags and skipped town why it doesn't make sense my little tulip you're following the same path as aqua marine to clarify both of you ... or is it both of you puppets would lavish me with genuine comments ... I thought ... you would boost my spirits adding sugar to my day ... and now and now poof ... you are gone it doesn't make sense there's no rhyme or reason I'm devastated you two were the only two friends I had here it was just a few weeks you were laughing laughing at my poems ... I thought it was genuine and now you're gone I don't know what to think anymore maybe it was all a facade It's weird I'm in a bubble a big bubble of mice and men, here is one of you nurses going to bring my psyche meds? help, help please let me see past this aberration is somebody out to hurt me? wheres the good light getting back to woo one of her contest that i entered double trouble, as i look back at it now i didn't smell one blade of grass in the placing and that comes on the heels of receiving at least 7 sevens from readers comments i thought that was weird, too or was that another stab in my back to hurt me my dear little tulip? like what i said i dont know what to think anymore esp. receiving any of the readers comments to my poems .. in the future i can think of it as being one of her puppets playing with me ... like austin, her cat, does to a piece of shrimp one step she be probir probably be next to exit stage i can see that playing out i cans see all her barbies in a frenzy, laughing, as i write nice picture cry and bare the black bear, i guess. connie pachecho 1/27/17

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Date: 1/27/2017 5:51:00 PM
Funny! Probir's going nowhere. I miss her too. She was a hoot! Very funny poem. Oh and by the way, it's San Woo as in suSan Woo:)
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