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Samurai Song, Haiku

delicate blossom rests in the still gnarled hand bruised petals weep tears weary eyes open tiny cuts, the body bleeds peace still years away sun rise breaks the hill heralds another battle draw your sword and charge Trisha Sugarek, 2011 From The World of Haiku

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Date: 10/31/2014 7:43:00 PM
this is so sad, it made me think of soldiers fighting for their country....this is where this read brough me and also the melancholy is powerful
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Trisha Sugarek
Date: 10/31/2014 8:07:00 PM
thank you, dear heart, that's all I ever touch someone with my poetry. xxoo Trish