Margarita Lillico Poet Rhyme

Same Lame

Since you were fixed under the knife 
your perfect face renewed your life. 
But darling, mine remains the same -
your attitude is pretty lame. 
I’d pay a fortune to revoke 
your face… except I’m badly broke. 

February 1, 2023

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Speaks Volumes March 30, 2023 at 12:10 PM A deserving win & worth the wait. Congrats

David Bose February 2, 2023 at 5:37 AM Appropriate, given our society seems to rely on going "under the knife" too often. I like the conversational tone you've achieved, especially with your "But darling". Nice message with a clear rhythm. Very nice. Dave Margarita Lillico February 2, 2023 at 11:48 AM Thank you, Dave. Trying to remain contemporary:)

Gershon Wolf February 1, 2023 at 9:01 PM That's 'twisting the knife' alright, Margarita. Sharp ink! ~ Gershon Margarita Lillico February 1, 2023 at 9:11 PM All virtual, no harm done :)