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Same Lame

Since you were fixed under the knife your perfect face renewed your life. But darling, mine remains the same - your attitude is pretty lame. I’d pay a fortune to revoke your face… except I’m badly broke. February 1, 2023 Sponsor: Line Gauthier Contest: Bite Size

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Speaks Volumes

Date: 3/30/2023 12:10:00 PM

A deserving win & worth the wait. Congrats

David Bose

Date: 2/2/2023 5:37:00 AM

Appropriate, given our society seems to rely on going "under the knife" too often. I like the conversational tone you've achieved, especially with your "But darling". Nice message with a clear rhythm. Very nice. Dave

Margarita Lillico
Date: 2/2/2023 11:48:00 AM

Thank you, Dave. Trying to remain contemporary:)

Gershon Wolf

Date: 2/1/2023 9:01:00 PM

That's 'twisting the knife' alright, Margarita. Sharp ink! ~ Gershon

Margarita Lillico
Date: 2/1/2023 9:11:00 PM

All virtual, no harm done :)