For contest Golden Age of Music by Oliver McKeithan
Time is short but feelings are strong Of course you’re singing our song First cranberry kiss sets me on fire Making my knees weak as I perspire Oh you send me on a long journey With the sun blazing the world turning Despite the times lack of civil rights Everything is fine in your arms tonight Your pearly smile plays me like a harp Words you weave now are amethyst art You whisper in my ear that I have your heart Marry me dear and we shall never part You send me to the moon and far beyond Like a flower I bloom in your sunny charm And the red hickey you leave on my neck Is like jewelry I hide least my folks be upset You thrill me honest you do Just like the song says it’s true And I loved you from the very first look Heavenly sounds of us sang by Sam Cooke
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