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Salvation 4 Lines Contest

NAILS pierced his hands, as he was SLAIN! His words convey his love for all. This Godly child born in a Manger Stall. Sacred scrawled scriptures says, sent Son sacrificed Savor. Silent One Contest 4 lines 1st line Anagram 2nd and 3rd line Couplet 4th line alliteration.

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James Inman

Date: 4/22/2020 8:05:00 AM

A well thought out piece, Michael.

Teddy Kimathi

Date: 12/23/2015 2:27:00 AM

Hi Michael. Congrats for your WIN with this spiritual poem! ;-)

Funom Makama

Date: 12/22/2015 7:57:00 AM

your discrete lines filled with sweet smelling ingredients so palatable to the mind are just beyond gratitude and appreciation. This page is a wonder and your poetry speaks volume of creativity beyond physical perspective. keep it up friend and this is definitely a 7.

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 12/22/2015 2:09:00 AM

Brilliant take michael n a great win.. big congrats!

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 12/21/2015 11:41:00 AM

Beautiful, powerful, inspirational piece that deserves to be on the winners' list! Congratulations, Michael on a wonderful win! Pandita

Paul Callus

Date: 12/21/2015 9:17:00 AM

Pleased to see this one on the winners' list, Michael. Congratulations!! // paul

Susan Gentry

Date: 12/21/2015 7:48:00 AM

Congratulations! Spiritual, timely, excellent lines.

John Hamilton

Date: 12/20/2015 10:36:00 PM

Very nice Michael, remembrance of our saviour, good to reflect. Thanks for posting well done!

Michael Tor
Date: 12/21/2015 6:40:00 AM

Thank you John I appreciate your kind comments. Thank you again.

Sandra Haight

Date: 12/20/2015 8:13:00 PM

This is such a great reminder of what Christmas is all about. Nicely done, Michael. Congratulations on your placement. Sandra

Michael Tor
Date: 12/21/2015 6:41:00 AM

Thank you Dear Sandra for your heartfelt comment. May you have a loving Christmas with all you love.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/20/2015 7:31:00 PM

this one has the christmas spirit. Congrats on a job well done, Michael.

Michael Tor
Date: 12/21/2015 6:42:00 AM

Thank You Dear Andrea. Your encouragements always touch me. Thank you again.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/20/2015 4:49:00 PM

michael, Congratulations on your wonderful win. Always ~LINDA~

Michael Tor
Date: 12/21/2015 6:43:00 AM

Thank you Linda love your hat in your avatar. Have a warm and wonderful Christmas and thank you again for your kind comments.

Janice Canerdy

Date: 12/20/2015 1:28:00 PM

Lovely and reverent, Michael. Congratulations, Janice

Michael Tor
Date: 12/21/2015 6:44:00 AM

Thank you Janice for your valued comment. Have a wonderful Christmas with all you love. Blessings your way.

Skat A

Date: 12/20/2015 11:33:00 AM

MICHAEL, Congratulations on your "4 line" win. WUV **SKAT Doodle** :)

Michael Tor
Date: 12/21/2015 6:45:00 AM

Hi Skat thank you Dear.

Paul Callus

Date: 12/20/2015 7:37:00 AM

This is clever and the topic fits in perfectly with this time of the year. gl in the contest, Michael. ~ May I take this opportunity to wish you a happy and blessed Christmas; also all the best for 2016! ~ paul

Michael Tor
Date: 12/21/2015 6:47:00 AM

I too want to wish you and all who you love Paul a blessed warm Christmas. Thank you for your valued comments my friend.