Michael Tor Poet Couplet

Salvation 4 Lines Contest

NAILS pierced his hands, as he was SLAIN!
His words convey his love for all.
This Godly child born in a Manger Stall.
Sacred scrawled scriptures says, sent Son sacrificed Savor.














Silent One Contest 4 lines  1st line Anagram  2nd and 3rd line Couplet 
4th line alliteration.

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Sara Kendrick October 1, 2024 at 2:19 PM Creative testimony of your faith. Thanks for sharing. Sara K Michael Tor October 2, 2024 at 2:07 AM Thank you Sara. Your kind words mean a lot. God bless you...

James Inman April 22, 2020 at 8:05 AM A well thought out piece, Michael.

Teddy Kimathi December 23, 2015 at 2:27 AM Hi Michael. Congrats for your WIN with this spiritual poem! ;-)

Funom Makama December 22, 2015 at 7:57 AM your discrete lines filled with sweet smelling ingredients so palatable to the mind are just beyond gratitude and appreciation. This page is a wonder and your poetry speaks volume of creativity beyond physical perspective. keep it up friend and this is definitely a 7.

Dr. Upma A. Sharma December 22, 2015 at 2:09 AM Brilliant take michael n a great win.. big congrats!

Pandita Sietesantos December 21, 2015 at 11:41 AM Beautiful, powerful, inspirational piece that deserves to be on the winners' list! Congratulations, Michael on a wonderful win! Pandita

Paul Callus December 21, 2015 at 9:17 AM Pleased to see this one on the winners' list, Michael. Congratulations!! // paul

Susan Gentry December 21, 2015 at 7:48 AM Congratulations! Spiritual, timely, excellent lines.

John Hamilton December 20, 2015 at 10:36 PM Very nice Michael, remembrance of our saviour, good to reflect. Thanks for posting well done! Michael Tor December 21, 2015 at 6:40 AM Thank you John I appreciate your kind comments. Thank you again.

Sandra Haight December 20, 2015 at 8:13 PM This is such a great reminder of what Christmas is all about. Nicely done, Michael. Congratulations on your placement. Sandra Michael Tor December 21, 2015 at 6:41 AM Thank you Dear Sandra for your heartfelt comment. May you have a loving Christmas with all you love.

Andrea Dietrich December 20, 2015 at 7:31 PM this one has the christmas spirit. Congrats on a job well done, Michael. Michael Tor December 21, 2015 at 6:42 AM Thank You Dear Andrea. Your encouragements always touch me. Thank you again.

Poet Destroyer A December 20, 2015 at 4:49 PM michael, Congratulations on your wonderful win. Always ~LINDA~ Michael Tor December 21, 2015 at 6:43 AM Thank you Linda love your hat in your avatar. Have a warm and wonderful Christmas and thank you again for your kind comments.

Janice Canerdy December 20, 2015 at 1:28 PM Lovely and reverent, Michael. Congratulations, Janice Michael Tor December 21, 2015 at 6:44 AM Thank you Janice for your valued comment. Have a wonderful Christmas with all you love. Blessings your way.

Skat A December 20, 2015 at 11:33 AM MICHAEL, Congratulations on your "4 line" win. WUV **SKAT Doodle** :) Michael Tor December 21, 2015 at 6:45 AM Hi Skat thank you Dear.

Paul Callus December 20, 2015 at 7:37 AM This is clever and the topic fits in perfectly with this time of the year. gl in the contest, Michael. ~ May I take this opportunity to wish you a happy and blessed Christmas; also all the best for 2016! ~ paul Michael Tor December 21, 2015 at 6:47 AM I too want to wish you and all who you love Paul a blessed warm Christmas. Thank you for your valued comments my friend.