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Salvation 4 Lines Contest

NAILS pierced his hands, as he was SLAIN!
His words convey his love for all.
This Godly child born in a Manger Stall.
Sacred scrawled scriptures says, sent Son sacrificed Savor.














Silent One Contest 4 lines  1st line Anagram  2nd and 3rd line Couplet 
4th line alliteration.

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Sara Kendrick Date: 10/1/2024 2:19:00 PM Creative testimony of your faith. Thanks for sharing. Sara K Login to Reply Michael Tor Date: 10/2/2024 2:07:00 AM Thank you Sara. Your kind words mean a lot. God bless you...

James Inman Date: 4/22/2020 8:05:00 AM A well thought out piece, Michael. Login to Reply

Teddy Kimathi Date: 12/23/2015 2:27:00 AM Hi Michael. Congrats for your WIN with this spiritual poem! ;-) Login to Reply

Funom Makama Date: 12/22/2015 7:57:00 AM your discrete lines filled with sweet smelling ingredients so palatable to the mind are just beyond gratitude and appreciation. This page is a wonder and your poetry speaks volume of creativity beyond physical perspective. keep it up friend and this is definitely a 7. Login to Reply

Dr. Upma A. Sharma Date: 12/22/2015 2:09:00 AM Brilliant take michael n a great win.. big congrats! Login to Reply

Pandita Sietesantos Date: 12/21/2015 11:41:00 AM Beautiful, powerful, inspirational piece that deserves to be on the winners' list! Congratulations, Michael on a wonderful win! Pandita Login to Reply

Paul Callus Date: 12/21/2015 9:17:00 AM Pleased to see this one on the winners' list, Michael. Congratulations!! // paul Login to Reply

Susan Gentry Date: 12/21/2015 7:48:00 AM Congratulations! Spiritual, timely, excellent lines. Login to Reply

John Hamilton Date: 12/20/2015 10:36:00 PM Very nice Michael, remembrance of our saviour, good to reflect. Thanks for posting well done! Login to Reply Michael Tor Date: 12/21/2015 6:40:00 AM Thank you John I appreciate your kind comments. Thank you again.

Sandra Haight Date: 12/20/2015 8:13:00 PM This is such a great reminder of what Christmas is all about. Nicely done, Michael. Congratulations on your placement. Sandra Login to Reply Michael Tor Date: 12/21/2015 6:41:00 AM Thank you Dear Sandra for your heartfelt comment. May you have a loving Christmas with all you love.

Andrea Dietrich Date: 12/20/2015 7:31:00 PM this one has the christmas spirit. Congrats on a job well done, Michael. Login to Reply Michael Tor Date: 12/21/2015 6:42:00 AM Thank You Dear Andrea. Your encouragements always touch me. Thank you again.

Poet Destroyer A Date: 12/20/2015 4:49:00 PM michael, Congratulations on your wonderful win. Always ~LINDA~ Login to Reply Michael Tor Date: 12/21/2015 6:43:00 AM Thank you Linda love your hat in your avatar. Have a warm and wonderful Christmas and thank you again for your kind comments.

Janice Canerdy Date: 12/20/2015 1:28:00 PM Lovely and reverent, Michael. Congratulations, Janice Login to Reply Michael Tor Date: 12/21/2015 6:44:00 AM Thank you Janice for your valued comment. Have a wonderful Christmas with all you love. Blessings your way.

Skat A Date: 12/20/2015 11:33:00 AM MICHAEL, Congratulations on your "4 line" win. WUV **SKAT Doodle** :) Login to Reply Michael Tor Date: 12/21/2015 6:45:00 AM Hi Skat thank you Dear.

Paul Callus Date: 12/20/2015 7:37:00 AM This is clever and the topic fits in perfectly with this time of the year. gl in the contest, Michael. ~ May I take this opportunity to wish you a happy and blessed Christmas; also all the best for 2016! ~ paul Login to Reply Michael Tor Date: 12/21/2015 6:47:00 AM I too want to wish you and all who you love Paul a blessed warm Christmas. Thank you for your valued comments my friend.