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Salvation

Severed tendrils of hope hang lifeless As antiquated memories of lost dreams Lie in a forbidden zone surrounded by silence. Validation is hard fought for, and soon becomes Another deception as I lie lost, misplaced, bleeding. Trepidation slows the endless journey to victory as I gaze into life’s mirror and search for elusive answers. But somehow, Onward I continue, knowing deep within my soul that perseverance Not only will lead to salvation, but allow me to find peace at last. Sponsor: Black Eyed Susan Contest Name: Acrostic contest - theme LOST

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 8/10/2012 6:48:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win in Susan's "Lost" contest Lucretia. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/9/2012 9:05:00 PM
lc.. congratulations with your awesome win. Hoping to read many contest tonight. always~ ;-) PD
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Date: 8/9/2012 7:53:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in my contest! it's hard to find those answers...
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Lucretia Crouse
Date: 8/9/2012 11:36:00 AM
Thank you so much Susan! Lucretia xx
Date: 8/8/2012 10:08:00 PM
Well done on your win. Lee
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Lucretia Crouse
Date: 8/9/2012 11:37:00 AM
Thank you Lee. :) Lucretia xx
Date: 8/8/2012 7:24:00 PM
Congratulations on your placement. Love, Joyce
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Lucretia Crouse
Date: 8/9/2012 11:38:00 AM
Thank you, Joyce. :) Lucretia xx
Date: 8/8/2012 3:45:00 PM
I really like this one and how it became so optimistic in the end. big congrats on your win. GREAT poem
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Lucretia Crouse
Date: 8/8/2012 5:38:00 PM
Thank you so much, Andrea. :) Lucretia xx

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