Salvation

Are you my dream of salvation, as long as my memory
For you I have searched within the skies above
Please forgive my sole of all past portrayal
For there is as such as a wonderful future
Free of struggle I have fallen deeply within your love
With the sun in our hands I have captured
An eager desire of only you dancing throughout minds eye
As this is for I, together, so openly written
Blinding my eyes with the truest of love
Holding knowledge that again I shall never find
I feast in aura, gaining strength with your passing presence 
Firing my spirit in body that had lain dormant within
As you gently guide I toward a city
Once thought so far and yet to be travelled, 
love I had never, only dreamt when seen
A place for the dove to fly and all to eternally sing
I have ended my chase of all rainbows
I serve you with deserved devotion
As I have found within you my ever searched for everything………

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008



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Date: 6/10/2009 11:24:00 PM
absolutly brilliant i like the flow and how dramatic this is well done; gareth
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Date: 6/11/2008 9:41:00 AM
This is excellent. I like the flow of the message. The theme is constant. Salvation certain flows throughout the poem. I like the line, "Blinding my eyes with the truest of love." Great job! ~ Joseph
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