Salute Victors Flag Waving On Chest

Out on Weeks Lease, shall do few things as I please

First, camp at base of Mt. Everest
Breathe same air, imbibe the mountains energy so vast
Seek to know, “what it takes to be World’s highest”
"How it feels when it goes under Conquerors feet"
Gather, "gracious in odd defeat, salute Victors flag waving on chest"    

Next, anchor at shore of Ganges
Bathe, imbibe the energy flowing since ages
Cool though polluted abused by the pilgrims
Seek to know, “what it takes to carry sacred belief and dreams”   
Gather," focus on strength, upkeep flow, forgiveness cleans"

Last, stand next to Leaning Tower of Pisa, famous Bell tower   
Stare at head leaning humbly as if murmuring in Visitors ear  
“Never compromise on foundation, else live ever in fear"
"Lose not hope, care and time settles weak foundation so rare"
"Desire to stand, finds courage to withstand wind, rain, rough weather”   


First Place           - October 2010 
Members Contest - A Week to do as I please 
Sponsored by      - Carol Brown
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Taylor Avatar
October 29, 2010 at 3:50 PM
Congrats, Hitendra. Awesome. Nice going. xxxRalph
Roberts Avatar
October 28, 2010 at 2:37 PM
congrats on your win in the contest with this lovely week to spend
Mehta Avatar
October 28, 2010 at 12:30 AM
@Tahera @John @Andrea @Dr Ram @ Linda @Carol.........many thnx for congratulatory wishes and nice encouraging comments on poem....Luv/Best wishes .....Hitendra Mehta
Mannan Avatar
October 27, 2010 at 9:05 PM
A wonderful write Hitendra. I really love this one. Many congratulations for this win.
Freeman Avatar
October 27, 2010 at 5:25 PM
Congratulations Hitendra on your worthy first place honors. Enjoy your glory, beautiful rhyme. Agape, Moses
Dietrich Avatar
October 27, 2010 at 2:40 PM
Hey, Hitendra, way to go!!!Is this your first really big win here? a big congratulations to you! LUv, Andrea
Mehta Avatar
October 27, 2010 at 1:15 PM
Congratulations on this well deserved win, Hitendra
Sweetheart Avatar
October 27, 2010 at 12:48 PM
Congrats Hitendra on your first place win in Carol's contest with this amazing entry my friend.. enjoy your top spot with so many wonderful peers with luv.. appreciate your sweet comments to my poetry readings luv..
Brown Avatar
October 27, 2010 at 12:30 PM
Congratulations and thank you Hitendra for taking the time to enter my contest. Love, Carol
Mehta Avatar
October 16, 2010 at 2:54 AM
@Skat - thnx for nice comments and good luck for contest...Luv/Best wishes always .....Hitendra Mehta
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October 15, 2010 at 10:04 AM
GREAT IMAGE, MEHTA! GOOD LUCK IN THE CONTEST*luv~SKAT
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