Salty and Sweet Limerick

Is it sweet or salty or sour?
Brimming with happiness or always dour?
Prancing, living with gaiety
Or waiting for a guillotine 
Now standing forever to scour?
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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November 7, 2013 at 12:02 PM
Hello Poet :)*nice* SWEET Or SALTY win................... HUGS ~SKAT~
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November 6, 2013 at 7:30 PM
Eugina, , Congratulations On your way to xool Sweet & Sour win... always~ Linda aka PD
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November 6, 2013 at 10:31 AM
Congrats on your winning work..Way to go!!!Sara
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November 5, 2013 at 8:18 AM
LInes 3 and 4 were a bit long; otherwise this was a cute limerick for me. Congrats in my contest.
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November 4, 2013 at 10:35 AM
- A very well written limerick! - Pleased to read your work, Euhinia ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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