Just James Poet Sonnet

Salt Spray

 Salt Spray

drops of tiny clear but bitter salt 
appear the result of my insult 
sprinkle spraying down from your twin suns 
this painful evening it runs and runs 

it runs away from the dying light 
it’s affecting your red tearful sight 
flowing down your frowning freckled face 
you need my warm husband love embrace
 
words aired in regretful past anger 
now become our love’s heavy anchor 
my words now need to be the first aid 
and apply a heartfelt wound band aid 

salt spray may well birth love’s miscarriage 
salt corrosion ruins a marriage 

-updated 25 August-

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Bl Devnath August 20, 2016 at 11:22 AM If in love love is seen only, all problems go away automatically, i think. Understanding and sacrifice lead nice and happy life. Well done my friend. Hugs, Cloudy poet, bl Just James August 22, 2016 at 2:51 AM Thank you BL

Pashang Salehi August 10, 2016 at 2:03 AM Nicely done.... Pashang Salehi August 13, 2016 at 12:53 AM You're very talented Just James August 10, 2016 at 1:13 PM Thank you Pashang

Jean Murray August 1, 2016 at 8:06 PM Any husband who sees and admits his wrongdoing, ain't doing too bad as a husband. Twice in my 23 years with mine, he caused such spillage from my eyes, I could not control them. There was never a "warm husband love embrace" for me. I'm emotional now. Well done poet!! Just James August 1, 2016 at 11:43 PM One mistake I can make but repeating this will surely kill any relationship...thanks for sharing your emotion Jean..hugs in the mail!