Salt Spray

Salt Spray drops of tiny clear but bitter salt appear the result of my insult sprinkle spraying down from your twin suns this painful evening it runs and runs it runs away from the dying light it’s affecting your red tearful sight flowing down your frowning freckled face you need my warm husband love embrace words aired in regretful past anger now become our love’s heavy anchor my words now need to be the first aid and apply a heartfelt wound band aid salt spray may well birth love’s miscarriage salt corrosion ruins a marriage -updated 25 August-

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Bl Devnath

Date: 8/20/2016 11:22:00 AM

If in love love is seen only, all problems go away automatically, i think. Understanding and sacrifice lead nice and happy life. Well done my friend. Hugs, Cloudy poet, bl

Just James
Date: 8/22/2016 2:51:00 AM

Thank you BL

Pashang Salehi

Date: 8/10/2016 2:03:00 AM

Nicely done....

Pashang Salehi
Date: 8/13/2016 12:53:00 AM

You're very talented

Just James
Date: 8/10/2016 1:13:00 PM

Thank you Pashang

Jean Murray

Date: 8/1/2016 8:06:00 PM

Any husband who sees and admits his wrongdoing, ain't doing too bad as a husband. Twice in my 23 years with mine, he caused such spillage from my eyes, I could not control them. There was never a "warm husband love embrace" for me. I'm emotional now. Well done poet!!

Just James
Date: 8/1/2016 11:43:00 PM

One mistake I can make but repeating this will surely kill any relationship...thanks for sharing your emotion Jean..hugs in the mail!