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Salt Mixed With Water

Embraced by misery Salt mixed with water flowed from her soul As love turned it’s back once more She had to face a lonely day As she realized he had gone away Flowing from her soul were drops of salt mixed with water Withering down her saddened face Gathering puddles, rivers formed around her And The sorrow coming from within broke the barrier sound Intertwined was pain and loss as she watched As love was lost

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Date: 2/8/2009 5:50:00 AM
Interesting description of a tear - great job honey - dad
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