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Salt Lake Pity

A Mormon in search of his god Took an hike where the Saints had trod When he went lame The angels came Preaching, "Nike shoes are for Nod!"

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Date: 12/23/2020 7:23:00 PM
G'day Rico ... those guys and gals do plenty of walking and knocking. No wonder they become lame - thanks Rico - Lindsay
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Rico Leffanta
Date: 12/24/2020 10:05:00 AM
I can not imagine why any religion would need missionaries, but the pandemic has made it easier to slam doors in their face! Aloha! Rico
Date: 12/20/2020 3:04:00 PM
three hour meetings definitely put one into the land of Nod!
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Rico Leffanta
Date: 12/21/2020 10:13:00 AM
I've noticed that religious people are quick to find fault with everyone and everything, so I imagine angels must be pros! So 3-minutes would be enough for me to zoom into Nod! Aloha! Rico
Date: 12/20/2020 2:52:00 PM
another gem Rico:-) hugs Jan xx
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Rico Leffanta
Date: 12/21/2020 10:14:00 AM
Mahalo, Jan! Aloha! Rico
Date: 12/20/2020 12:28:00 PM
I am here to applaud !
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Rico Leffanta
Date: 12/21/2020 10:14:00 AM
I've never had the clap, but Mahalo nui loa! Aloha! Rico

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