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Salt Is Akin To God

Salt permeates sea. God permeates universe. We cannot see salt, but know it's presence through taste. Same way God is felt not seen! Just as salt can be taken out  of water through evaporation we can perceive God in all through spiritual scriptures Scriptures state we are the salt, the soul, God himself. With efforts when we extract self from body. We perceive God in everything We get salvation from the cycle of life, we realise both salt and ocean exists within God. We all are part of god 6th march 2021 Written for SALT contest Sponsor : Anthony Biaanco Placed 3 among 35 entries Syllable count checked at HMS

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Date: 3/11/2021 10:17:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. A wonderful write. Love your line, "We all are part of God." Have a blessed day writing away...................
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Rama Balasubramanian
Date: 3/11/2021 7:18:00 PM
Thanks Paula. Take care, God bless!
Date: 3/10/2021 11:42:00 PM
Congrats on your win with this lovely poem. Very true!!
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Rama Balasubramanian
Date: 3/11/2021 4:01:00 AM
Thanks Krish. Thanks for the inspiration too. You are a gifted poet. God bless! Take care, Rama
Date: 3/10/2021 10:06:00 PM
Yes....God and Salt do make a fine comparision....Congrats on your win Rama :)
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Rama Balasubramanian
Date: 3/10/2021 11:38:00 PM
Thanks and same to you. Take care,God bless!
Date: 3/10/2021 9:48:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Rama. <3 Eve
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Rama Balasubramanian
Date: 3/10/2021 11:37:00 PM
Thanks and same to you. Take care,God bless!
Date: 3/8/2021 3:55:00 PM
Awesome, Rama! A winner in my book... Sprinkles of Truth, Gershon
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Rama Balasubramanian
Date: 3/9/2021 12:06:00 PM
Thanks Gershon, Take care, God bless!
Date: 3/6/2021 6:52:00 AM
You are right - they say when a person is good he/she is like the salt of the earth and the earth belongs to God. Also God saw fit to punish Lot's wife and turned her into a pillar of salt when she looked back as Sodom and Gomorrah were destroyed by God because of the peoples evil ways who lived in these cities. But God spared Lot and his family. He warned Lot to tell his wife, she didn't listen. Great write - good luck. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
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Rama Balasubramanian
Date: 3/9/2021 12:06:00 PM
Thanks for the insightful comments. Take care,God. Bless!
Date: 3/6/2021 5:04:00 AM
quite an argumentative poem. Best for a win.
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Rama Balasubramanian
Date: 3/9/2021 12:05:00 PM
Thanks Victor. Take care,God bless!

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