Salt and Vinegar

He was somewhat enamored,
with salt and vinegar
he chipped away his health
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Nance Avatar
September 13, 2014 at 6:59 AM
Probably not the best combination. I liked the word play. :) hugs
Lamoureux Avatar
September 13, 2014 at 8:37 AM
Thanks Casarah, personally Barbeque chips are my favorite.
Manassian Avatar
November 5, 2013 at 12:30 PM
I got it too....brilliant....Just not used to humor from you...That play on words is great...
Lamoureux Avatar
November 5, 2013 at 1:06 PM
What, you don't see me as humorous? I must be losing my touch!
Dietrich Avatar
October 31, 2013 at 1:27 AM
I think it's over my head. I too went right to those salt and vinegar chips I love but I see Richard is saying you have thrown us. haha. I kind of get it. but I still love salt and vinegar chips!
Lamoureux Avatar
October 31, 2013 at 9:17 AM
Ha ha, glad to see I can throw you.
Seal Avatar
October 29, 2013 at 10:04 PM
Back to print this off, to give to my mate. I think the genius of this write may have thrown a few lol. Take care, Richard, and thanks for visit, appreciated.
Lamoureux Avatar
October 30, 2013 at 8:17 AM
I'm honored!
Davis Avatar
October 29, 2013 at 8:36 AM
Richard This is cute and creative. UH OH I like salt and vinegar chips once in a while. I'm a bad girl. LOL Nice job Thanks for commenting on my Haunted House Memories poem. I always appreciate your insightful comments.
Lamoureux Avatar
October 29, 2013 at 9:43 AM
Thanks Robin, my pleasure!
Seal Avatar
October 28, 2013 at 7:26 PM
LOL Brilliant. My greek chippie mate knows I don't do salt an vinegar, so I'm safe on this. Very clever write Rick, I'm telling him this one. Take care, Richard
Lamoureux Avatar
October 29, 2013 at 9:44 AM
Thanks Richard, I was wondering if anyone was going to comment on this one.
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