Salt and Vinegar

He was somewhat enamored, with salt and vinegar he chipped away his health

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Casarah Nance

Date: 9/13/2014 6:59:00 AM

Probably not the best combination. I liked the word play. :) hugs

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 9/13/2014 8:37:00 AM

Thanks Casarah, personally Barbeque chips are my favorite.

Eileen Manassian

Date: 11/5/2013 12:30:00 PM

I got it too....brilliant....Just not used to humor from you...That play on words is great...

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 11/5/2013 1:06:00 PM

What, you don't see me as humorous? I must be losing my touch!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/31/2013 1:27:00 AM

I think it's over my head. I too went right to those salt and vinegar chips I love but I see Richard is saying you have thrown us. haha. I kind of get it. but I still love salt and vinegar chips!

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 10/31/2013 9:17:00 AM

Ha ha, glad to see I can throw you.

Richard D Seal

Date: 10/29/2013 10:04:00 PM

Back to print this off, to give to my mate. I think the genius of this write may have thrown a few lol. Take care, Richard, and thanks for visit, appreciated.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 10/30/2013 8:17:00 AM

I'm honored!

Robin Davis

Date: 10/29/2013 8:36:00 AM

Richard This is cute and creative. UH OH I like salt and vinegar chips once in a while. I'm a bad girl. LOL Nice job Thanks for commenting on my Haunted House Memories poem. I always appreciate your insightful comments.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 10/29/2013 9:43:00 AM

Thanks Robin, my pleasure!

Richard D Seal

Date: 10/28/2013 7:26:00 PM

LOL Brilliant. My greek chippie mate knows I don't do salt an vinegar, so I'm safe on this. Very clever write Rick, I'm telling him this one. Take care, Richard

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 10/29/2013 9:44:00 AM

Thanks Richard, I was wondering if anyone was going to comment on this one.