Salt

Love is the salt rubbed in the wounds of my loneliness.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Sinha Avatar
October 17, 2016 at 10:59 PM
Salt is a necessary evil...nice comparision of Love as being salt ...
Lawless Avatar
October 10, 2016 at 5:46 PM
OUCH!! Well done Luke
Irwin Avatar
October 9, 2016 at 8:55 PM
Thank you so much.
Dietrich Avatar
October 9, 2016 at 8:35 PM
oh my, sad and profound. Very nice, Luke
Y. Avatar
October 9, 2016 at 12:28 PM
Hi Luke, This is a good one liner! Congratulations on your 1st place win: -) Alexis
Marcum Wong Avatar
October 9, 2016 at 12:22 PM
Brilliant Luke! Congratulations on your deserving first placement! 7 ; )
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