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Salt which good can I do, even to qualify award? Consumers will complain, 'you exceeded it is the problem'! Decreasing is blame, 'you deny our comfort'! Salt which Good can I do, to be praised in the Broth? Poor me Salt, I have bad reputation in Broth! When they prepare mat, they insult me with under sleeve abusive remarks! Children and old men, who will support me? Salt which Good can I do, to be praised in the Broth? I don’t have good reputation in Broth, Me poor Salt! I need enough knowledge, to satisfy my relatives To be away from slander, to come out to the top Salt which Good can I do, to be praised in the Broth? My neighbor 'Bitterness', and my relative 'Sweetness' Our Big brother 'Honey', and my compatriot 'Bitter aloe' Consider my situation, give me your Wisdom Salt which Good can I do, to be praised in the Broth?

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Date: 5/21/2016 1:21:00 AM
MUSSA ALLY BWAKILA, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :) Drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 5/18/2016 12:34:00 AM
Mussa, Nice and wonderful first entry. Welcome to poetry soup. Hope you will enjoy our community. Wish you a fruitful journey ahead...........//:) hugs
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Date: 5/17/2016 11:25:00 AM
Mussa, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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