Salt

Salt comes in white and a beautiful pink Amazing foods like chips-pretzels make me want to wink Land covered in ice just sprinkle this mineral Their Russian wedding ceremony had Bread-salt scriptural Date Written: 2/22/2021 Note: Acrostic Rhyme Honorable Mention SALT Contest Judged:3/10/2021 Sponsored by: Anthony Biaanco

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Eve Roper

Date: 3/10/2021 9:58:00 PM

Congratulations on your win, Paula, great entry. <3 Eve

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 3/11/2021 9:32:00 AM

Thank You, for writing and for your congratulations. You made my day with your note. I did not know I had a win. It is an honor. Glad you like my fun salt write. Have a blessed day writing away.................

Brian Sambourne

Date: 3/5/2021 9:21:00 PM

A very clever write, Paula. A joy to read as well. Best wishes always, Brian

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 3/6/2021 7:07:00 AM

Thank You, for reading, for writing and for your kind words. Glad you like my fun salt write. Have a blessed day writing away.................

Paulette Calasibetta

Date: 2/26/2021 9:29:00 AM

Very clever acrostic....."Their Russian Wedding ceremony had Bread-salt scriptural".....just perfect.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 2/27/2021 7:05:00 AM

Thank You, for writing. Glad you like this fun write. Have a blessed day writing away.................

Robert Pettit

Date: 2/23/2021 4:15:00 PM

I agree with everything Carolyn has said just below.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 2/24/2021 8:15:00 AM

Thank You, for reading, for writing and for your best wishes in the contest. So glad you like my fun write. The pink salt is good with food. If you can not find it in your stores then look on the web. (I think you live in Hawaii. Try Wal-Mart. Look in different departments of the store.) I have a friend and that is all he will use. Yes, the road salt is not good on the cars. Have a blessed day writing away.................

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 2/23/2021 1:11:00 PM

Very clever acrostic, Paula. I haven't seen pink salt yet, but the white salt clings to cars and eats paint here by the sea. Very cute closing line. Best wishes in the contest! Hugs, Carolyn

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 2/24/2021 8:14:00 AM