Paula Goldsmith Poet Acrostic

Salt

Salt comes in white and a beautiful pink                   
Amazing foods like chips-pretzels make me want to wink  
Land covered in ice just sprinkle this mineral                 
Their Russian wedding ceremony had Bread-salt scriptural            
        

Date Written: 2/22/2021                                                                                                                                                      
Note: Acrostic Rhyme

Honorable Mention 
SALT Contest Judged:3/10/2021 Sponsored by: Anthony Biaanco

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Eve Roper March 10, 2021 at 9:58 PM Congratulations on your win, Paula, great entry. <3 Eve Paula Goldsmith March 11, 2021 at 9:32 AM Thank You, for writing and for your congratulations. You made my day with your note. I did not know I had a win. It is an honor. Glad you like my fun salt write. Have a blessed day writing away.................

Brian Sambourne March 5, 2021 at 9:21 PM A very clever write, Paula. A joy to read as well. Best wishes always, Brian Paula Goldsmith March 6, 2021 at 7:07 AM Thank You, for reading, for writing and for your kind words. Glad you like my fun salt write. Have a blessed day writing away.................

Paulette Calasibetta February 26, 2021 at 9:29 AM Very clever acrostic....."Their Russian Wedding ceremony had Bread-salt scriptural".....just perfect. Paula Goldsmith February 27, 2021 at 7:05 AM Thank You, for writing. Glad you like this fun write. Have a blessed day writing away.................

Robert Pettit February 23, 2021 at 4:15 PM I agree with everything Carolyn has said just below. Paula Goldsmith February 24, 2021 at 8:15 AM Thank You, for reading, for writing and for your best wishes in the contest. So glad you like my fun write. The pink salt is good with food. If you can not find it in your stores then look on the web. (I think you live in Hawaii. Try Wal-Mart. Look in different departments of the store.) I have a friend and that is all he will use. Yes, the road salt is not good on the cars. Have a blessed day writing away.................

Carolyn Devonshire February 23, 2021 at 1:11 PM Very clever acrostic, Paula. I haven't seen pink salt yet, but the white salt clings to cars and eats paint here by the sea. Very cute closing line. Best wishes in the contest! Hugs, Carolyn Paula Goldsmith February 24, 2021 at 8:14 AM Thank You, for reading, for writing and for your best wishes in the contest. So glad you like my fun write. The pink salt is good with food. If you can not find it in your stores then look on the web. (I think you live in Hawaii. Try Wal-Mart. Look in different departments of the store.) I have a friend and that is all he will use. Yes, the road salt is not good on the cars. Have a blessed day writing away.................