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A broken heart. A broken heart. Drawing of a heart on a cracked wall. Broken relationships. Treason and betrayal. Past love. A quarrel. Grief Stock Photo

Sally's Valentine Pony

Note: I tried entering Andrea's Valentine Contest. I struggled. And cried. Fished for a fish that wasn't all there. Then I caught one after the contest closed. Happy I am to reel one in.

Sally's Valentine brought sugar and sweets
She was excited for lights out and treats
Perhaps a night on the town
But her excitement turned down
When fake Romeo ordered Uber Eats

connie pachecho

2/11/26
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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Dietrich Avatar
April 1, 2026 at 12:59 AM
Oh so cute. Just seeing this now. At least you finally did one. Sorry I am seeing it so late. The last line was just how a limerick should end
Pachecho Avatar
March 10, 2026 at 11:18 PM
Connie, you are so funny ... fished for fish that wasn't there. Girl, you will never be a swan.
Empress Avatar
February 15, 2026 at 2:52 AM
The last line made me smile, haha, fake romeo ordering from uber eats, uber eats is so convenient in some parts of the world now. The world has evolved and changed so much, and your use of it truly is refreshing to read! Such authentic poetry always is admired by me, dear Connie! Absolute pleasure reading you too. Hope Valentines day was a nice one for you. Sending you light always
Pachecho Avatar
February 19, 2026 at 2:39 PM
Ink, thank you for the cup of tea.
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