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Salluting Sinners

I've been watching and waiting for awhile.. I lurk with a smirk, a Crocodile. In a swamp that's swollen with uncontrollable, unconsoloble, &undereducated people. They praise a steeple of low standards controlled by foes but we call them commanders being a bystandard is the new felon A once bright but now dim lantern and no ones been reminding us to refuel so we feed off each other.. Musical chairs with fools. 2/2/14 -R.R. B.Maxine

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Date: 2/9/2014 7:01:00 AM
Wonderful piece of a poem, congrats on the win, maxine
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Date: 2/7/2014 7:44:00 PM
Winner List: Impress me III! (Old / New) Sponsored by: Giorgio V. are posted and I will: Congratulate you with your winning poem,Maxine !!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 2/2/2014 9:30:00 PM
HOLY MOLY! This is a superb and amazing and such reality and truth in this poem! Wow B. I love it! I love it! Great write, I love how you capture people and how you express your feelings with your superb word choice! I love your last line "Musical chairs with fools" wow that is powerful! Amazing job B. xoxo :) This is going on my fav's and you my new favorite poet!
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Date: 2/6/2014 3:26:00 PM
I am so gracious and flattered! Infinite thanks to you Chris :)

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