B. Maxine Revolution Poet Rhyme

Salluting Sinners

I've been watching and waiting for awhile..
I lurk with a smirk, a Crocodile.
In a swamp that's swollen with 
          uncontrollable, 
           unconsoloble, 
        &undereducated 
               people.
They praise a steeple of low standards
controlled by foes but we call them commanders
being a bystandard is the new felon
A once bright but now dim lantern
and no ones been reminding us to refuel
so we feed off each other..

Musical chairs with fools.

2/2/14
-R.R.
B.Maxine

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Dr.Ram Mehta February 9, 2014 at 7:01 AM Wonderful piece of a poem, congrats on the win, maxine

Anne-Lise Andresen February 7, 2014 at 7:44 PM Winner List: Impress me III! (Old / New) Sponsored by: Giorgio V. are posted and I will: Congratulate you with your winning poem,Maxine !!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Chris Boskovski February 2, 2014 at 9:30 PM HOLY MOLY! This is a superb and amazing and such reality and truth in this poem! Wow B. I love it! I love it! Great write, I love how you capture people and how you express your feelings with your superb word choice! I love your last line "Musical chairs with fools" wow that is powerful! Amazing job B. xoxo :) This is going on my fav's and you my new favorite poet! B. Maxine Revolution February 6, 2014 at 3:26 PM I am so gracious and flattered! Infinite thanks to you Chris :)