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Saline Comforting



Skating thru life on a frozen memory,
a mirror pond of icy regret
Blaming shadows for the clinging, cold misery — 
no reason given why he left
Just an empty place remains,
a hole in the heart
Smiling still face inside a silver locket,
picture that punctures
You loved those engaging conversations;
the prickly sweet teasing, low-cooing lip squeezing
Now it’s just an echo chamber
of fallen tears ... sullen sound 
of a hollow, tarnished ring
With naked desire,
you perversely bathe in saline comforting
Cool, wet sadness so soothing
Do a pillow dive drown each night,
suffocated thoughts in the dwindling light
Mourning cries heard every dawn,
misty grieving you arise
Only lonely sheets take pity on your plight
Unbidden tears mired in Rx reverie,
pharmaceutical relief only can give you sleep
Drowsy escape from the pain ... 
suspended animation from the emotional suffering
Unrequited love leaves a permanent stain
So soothing is this liquid sadness,
it lets you fall deeper from a hurtful reality
Saline comforting is how you dream,
always hoping
tropical tears will melt this frozen memory

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 6/4/2018 11:15:00 PM
Man you get right in there and peel back the pain of everyone for everyone to feel. No amount of saline can make me numb to your words. Awesome lines throughout this poem Freddie!
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Date: 5/20/2018 10:45:00 AM
As poets we live many lives. I’m glad this is not your reality. You can’t blame Daniel for believing it is you, because you add sinew and muscle to these dried out bones.
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Date: 5/17/2018 9:29:00 AM
“Do a pillow dive drown each night” and the final line! Nice write!
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Date: 5/17/2018 5:01:00 AM
It ain't me of whom I speak, Daniel. It is my poetic voice for those going thru the traumatic loss of unrequited love in their life. Ty for the gracious comments everyone. Love and peace. Romantic Warrior
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Date: 5/16/2018 7:26:00 PM
I feel your pain in this one Freddie. Not sure of the circumstances but i will say i am sorry for your loss. This is the voice of grief.
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Date: 5/16/2018 3:39:00 PM
Wow...Freddie, I am blown away by these words...Very captivating write. AWESOME!
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