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Salad Salad Salad

Salad, salad, salad, every day of the year Keeping me thin and trim, but it's not working I fear You'd think by now I'd be slimmer than a cow This obsession for Big Macs is really severe

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J.W. Earnings

Date: 12/25/2016 6:33:00 AM

:D Hilarious but yeah - can't resist junk food. But, salads are good too. Great poem! Rated this a 7 for grandness!

Jack Ellison
Date: 12/25/2016 7:09:00 AM

Whoaaaaa!!! Great words of niceness! Thank you my friend!!!

Lim'Rik Flats

Date: 12/23/2016 10:11:00 AM

Soon I head my ship south//Soon I will close my mouth//to carbs and beer//Yes I fear!//leaving this well-stocked houth. MAC ON JACKSON!!! You gonna come down and visit?

Jack Ellison
Date: 12/24/2016 8:49:00 PM

Sorry for my tardiness, John John!!! As far as visiting you down south in Arizona... it is definitely a possibility! Cathie has a childhood friend living in Sedona so we could divide up our visit! No REAL plans yet but we will keep you posted! IT WOULD BE A REAL HOOT!!! We don't want to impose though, so we won't overstay our welcome! Thanks John John... will keep you posted!

Adeniji Toluwalope Gideon

Date: 12/23/2016 10:08:00 AM

Great work... Jack, I love the structure.

Jack Ellison
Date: 12/24/2016 8:50:00 PM

You are too kind, my friend! Thank you!

Tim Smith

Date: 12/23/2016 8:44:00 AM

Salad salad salad tossed...I fear im getting really lost...craving meat...cooked over heat...I don't even care what is the cost

Jack Ellison
Date: 12/24/2016 8:54:00 PM

I've had basically a salad a day for about 5 years now! 3 cheers for me!!! lol