Saints and Sinners

Saints and Sinners
For Contest:

The sinners will abuse you leaving you broken, battered and torn.
The saints will say I love you, a bright star you are being born.

The sinners will cast blame compulsively until you believe it.
The saints will give you armor, lift you up with laughter and wit.

The sinners will do anything to make sure they get their way.
The saints give you strength while singing everything will be ok.

The sinners will spew their endless lies trying to twist your mind.
The saints will stand by truth, lead you to people who are kind.

The sinners will take it further, acting out with horrific crime.
The saints believe in justice. It goes through the courts this time.

The sinners face their consequence still claiming they did no wrong.
The saints celebrate your righteousness, as life becomes your song.

Heidi Sands

*Placed 7th in Contest: Saints and Sinners
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Y. Avatar
November 8, 2016 at 8:01 AM
Hi Heidi, Congratulations on your wining write ;-) Alexis
Sands Avatar
November 8, 2016 at 8:28 AM
Thank you Alexis! :)
White Avatar
November 7, 2016 at 12:20 PM
Congratulations on your placement :)
Sands Avatar
November 7, 2016 at 12:58 PM
Thank you Darren. I appreciate that.
Martin Avatar
October 31, 2016 at 1:18 PM
Like the contrasting line pairs Best of luck in the contest :-)
Robinson Jr. Avatar
October 27, 2016 at 2:00 PM
I agree w/Mike, Franklin and Larry. A beautiful piece of poetry, Heidi. With truisms that stand the test of time. Great inspirational write. Love you, lady. RW
Sands Avatar
October 27, 2016 at 2:22 PM
Thank you. Good way to put it: Truisms that stand the test of time.
Hauser  Avatar
October 27, 2016 at 8:25 AM
Wonderful piece!
Sands Avatar
October 27, 2016 at 8:50 AM
Thanks Mike!
Price Avatar
October 27, 2016 at 7:45 AM
A great comparison of good and bad. Good job
Sands Avatar
October 27, 2016 at 8:50 AM
Thank you very much! Have a nice day.:)
Bradfield Avatar
October 26, 2016 at 9:30 PM
Well done and all true, Heidi! Good luck in the contest..Larry
Sands Avatar
October 27, 2016 at 7:31 AM
Hi Larry , Thank you .!
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