Saint Valentines Eve

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Do you remember - Saint Valentine’s Eve

Do you remember those midnight bell chimes
On the arrival of Saint Valentine 

You and me wrapped in a cocoon of love
Only us in our world, yet night was abuzz
Under the moon and crystal stars above

Rousing the sky was Cupid and his bow
Every lonely heart shot with an arrow
Mine and yours were already intertwined
Embraced with the grace of Saint Valentine 
Memoirs we made that magnificent Eve 
Believe me my darling they'll never leave
Every moment a souvenir to keep
Remember them in your dreams whilst you sleep.

Valentine's wild rose reverie of year
Yesterday's memory, love's souvenir.
Quote: Poets own 

13th February 2021

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Gershon Wolf

Date: 2/14/2021 4:59:00 PM

Extra, extra-sweet, Belle, with a cherry on top. I taste a big winner! Lovely! HVD, Gershon

Alexis Y.

Date: 2/14/2021 7:09:00 AM

Hi Belle, I adore Mickey and Minnie. This is such a lovely write in the acrostic form. I enjoyed it from start to finish. Best wishes in the contest:-) Alexis

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 2/14/2021 7:57:00 AM

Thank you Alexis, so pleased you enjoyed this acrostic of love. All the best... Belle :-)

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 2/14/2021 1:58:00 AM

Lovely write... a beautiful Valentine... God bless you dear lady. with love and prayers, Gina

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 2/14/2021 2:13:00 AM

Thank you Gina, God bless, love and hugs ~ Belle

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 2/13/2021 10:32:00 AM

You are sure not to forget it quickly. Lively poem full of romance. ~~

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 2/13/2021 11:12:00 AM

Thank you Victor, some memories are never forgotten, they stay safe in one’s treasure chest - that’s the heart ~~ Belle

Rama Balasubramanian

Date: 2/13/2021 10:16:00 AM

wrapped in a cocoon of love, Memoirs we made that magnificent Eve, Believe me my darling they'll never leave, Every moment a souvenir to keep, I simply loved these lines. If we could remember such memories and recollect them of and on how beautiful life would become. God bless! Take care, Rama

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 2/13/2021 11:08:00 AM

Rama, it’s so good to receive such positive and encouraging feedback. Thank you very much indeed. God bless to you too, keep safe and well ~ Belle