Sailor's Warning- 5

-For the broken sailor-

Alone:
ship's tattered,
sail's worn,
how I'm torn.
Stolen
was the sea from
the boat.
Immovable 
is the boat
from this spot.
How hurt I remain.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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A   Avatar
April 30, 2012 at 8:28 PM
nice... & deep...pd
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April 30, 2012 at 12:50 AM
very touching,great write.
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