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Sailing In the Spirit of Hope

V ~*~ ~*+*~ I Have Got a soul Established from The very foundations It is sailing as a vessel Thru the tides of long ago~ In order that I may obtain, A vast knowledge of this present world ~ From what there is truly left of it to gain, That I may lend of it, that which I have learned So that others that come after me shall maintain. I Am A soul born of generations past, living in the right now, Sailing in the spirit of a generational faith, through an ever-present sea of hopefulness ^~~~~~~~~~~~^~~~~~~~~~~^~~~~~~~~~~~~~^~~~~~~~~~~~^~~~~~~~~~~ ~~~~~~^~~~~~~~~~~~~~^ ~~~~~~~^~~~~~~~~~~~~~^~~~~~~~~^~~~~~~~~~^~~~~~~~~~~~^~~~~~~~ ~^~~~~~~~~^~~~~~~~~~~

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Date: 10/12/2008 9:17:00 AM
great inspirational write, take care D-nyce
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Date: 10/11/2008 10:31:00 PM
I like, our thoughts were so close. Please don't stop sharing, more more, more. #1 fan
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Date: 10/10/2008 1:20:00 AM
captivating, indeed a good craft of yours madam. with much respect, Gino
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Date: 10/7/2008 8:53:00 PM
what a most beautiful and warm piece of poetry. thank you for reading my Colorful leafs falling and for your comment
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Date: 10/6/2008 11:33:00 AM
Beautiful and creative poem. Keep the faith and you'll get through the hopelessness. Love the shape of this poem--so artistic. Thank you for sharing your talent with us and for your kind words regarding my poem. God bless you. Karen
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Date: 10/5/2008 9:45:00 PM
I actually tried to hit the 7 twice to give you either a 14 or a 77 but alas 7 it must be - Loved this poem Adell - God Bless
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Date: 10/5/2008 7:49:00 PM
This is an excellent poem. I like the flow of the words and the topology. This appears to be a Christmas concrete poem. I really like the ending lines regarding the ancestors and their knowledge of faith. Great job! ~Joseph.
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