Sotto Poet Poet Triolet

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Sailing Fervor

You caught me waiting at the shore
I was awed by concealed passion
Storm of deep feelings jailed my core
You caught me waiting at the shore
Longing to squeeze you and have more
Love is more fierce than compassion
You caught me waiting at the shore
I was awed by concealed passion.

Checked by HMS.COM/ 8 lines with 8 Syllables each/ ABaAabAB

Written: December 23, 2022

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SECOND CHANCE Poetry Contest
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Sara Kendrick December 25, 2022 at 11:24 AM Reads like a good contender for the contest to me. Way to go. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara

Terry Miller December 25, 2022 at 2:40 AM A beautiful poem I have never attempted a triolet, a winner for sure.

Valsa George December 23, 2022 at 8:34 PM A poem rocking in the whirlwind of romantic fervor ! All the best in the contest !

Evelyn Judy Buehler December 23, 2022 at 8:06 PM A beautifully imagined tale of passion. :)

Unseeking Seeker December 23, 2022 at 6:51 PM Step aside folks, we have our winner!

Mystic Rose Rose December 23, 2022 at 6:08 PM This is a well done triolet, very sensual and beautiful :)