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You caught me waiting at the shore I was awed by concealed passion Storm of deep feelings jailed my core You caught me waiting at the shore Longing to squeeze you and have more Love is more fierce than compassion You caught me waiting at the shore I was awed by concealed passion.
Checked by HMS.COM/ 8 lines with 8 Syllables each/ ABaAabAB Written: December 23, 2022 Chance Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Julia Ward SECOND CHANCE Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Brian Strand

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Date: 12/25/2022 11:24:00 AM
Reads like a good contender for the contest to me. Way to go. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara
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Date: 12/25/2022 2:40:00 AM
A beautiful poem I have never attempted a triolet, a winner for sure.
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Date: 12/23/2022 8:34:00 PM
A poem rocking in the whirlwind of romantic fervor ! All the best in the contest !
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Date: 12/23/2022 8:06:00 PM
A beautifully imagined tale of passion. :)
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Date: 12/23/2022 6:51:00 PM
Step aside folks, we have our winner!
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Date: 12/23/2022 6:08:00 PM
This is a well done triolet, very sensual and beautiful :)
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