June 29, 2023
For A Brian Strand Premiere Contest No, 1226
L on sail never enters the Breaker zone o | \ a | \ The tranquil sea surface ripples the boat dances delighted away from the shore destination far ~~~’’’~~~~’’’’~~~’’’’~~~~~’’~~’’’~~ ~~~~~’’’~~~~’’’’~~~~’’’~~~~’’’’~~~
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