Sailing Away Under a Silver Moon Forever

As the morning slowly awakens I see how those beautiful eyes
Of yours warmly shine bright and share thy palpable feelings of
Enchanted moments of true love and unbridled fiery emotions. 

Making love to me in the depths of your sweet dreams proves to be 
Quite interesting as angels fly by and giggle softly at this prospect.
Yet, as we touch, caress, and kiss deeply—your dreams are now reality.

A lively passion burns inside such loving beauty as all pain fades away,
And I know you are that special one I have longed for my entire life.
The pulchritude of your radiant presence and spirit bedazzles me now.

As we adorn one treasured pearl filling our hearts with its deep pleasure,
Our minds now connect as one, visualizing eternal dances of true love
That echo on in caves beneath our psyche sounding our mutual passion. 

Sailing away under a silver moon forever is where we need to be as two
Sultry lovers and like-spirits who have eaten that sweet forbidden fruit,
And to know we shall both scale infinite heights one day into eternity.

Gary Bateman and Liam McDaid – A Collaborated Poem,
Copyright © All Rights Reserved – April 29, 2018
(Tercet)

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018



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Date: 8/5/2018 5:13:00 PM
Hey Liam, I forgot to comment earlier on this on my side. It was a pleasure for both of us to work together on this particular Tercet. Shared Ink works wonders!! Best Always, Gary
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Date: 6/6/2018 9:15:00 AM
Your collaboration on this excellent poem has scaled to new heights...well done my talented friends:-) God bless you both...Donna.
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