Sailing

She misses the morning mist;
the deep, shadowed vista of valleys
hair flying
across her face like curtains

her papa at the helm of  ‘Atlanta’. 
passing plagues of flies
at the bridge where fishermen cleaned their catches

Each day like a page and once turned
no chance of ever re-tracing.


5/13/2013

For Russell Sivey’s  5 minute Challenge
Used the wordlist as a trigger and wrote for 5 mins.

Mist, helm, part, page, plaque, hair, traces, bridge, curtain, vista
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Lamoureux Avatar
December 21, 2017 at 10:10 AM
Dropping by to wish you a Merry Christmas. I enjoyed reading this one.
Delaney Avatar
December 21, 2017 at 6:37 PM
Thanks Richard: Merry Christmas and hope you are in your new place to enjoy the festive season. We even have a tree up this year. Blessings to you and yours. SuZ
A   Avatar
May 18, 2013 at 8:58 PM
Congratulation on a well deserved win, always enjoying your poems plus more... I like the way everyone showed off their poem in less than 5 minutes..... LINDA
A  Avatar
May 15, 2013 at 11:16 AM
A nice 5 minute poem. Congrats :-) SKAT
Hicks Avatar
May 14, 2013 at 2:35 AM
I can really see the mind flowing in this one... I felt as though it was about to really take off, but then got abruptly stopped by the time limit. Impressive work! I've never tried a word list before... maybe someday I'll try that.
Dietrich Avatar
May 13, 2013 at 10:58 PM
oh my gosh and you used a word list too??? You are remarkable!!! (thanks for my win in your contest. It was your first contest, right?)
Delaney Avatar
May 14, 2013 at 12:34 AM
Yes my first Contest and I am tired so will take a break between posting another.
Delaney Avatar
May 14, 2013 at 12:33 AM
Andrea: It takes me back to the Buzz Challenges on Kookamonga Square and the UTNE Cafe had a challenge like this where they would post the words and you had to post a poem in the 15minute time range. You get fast at putting words together. It is a good exercise really.
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