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Sailing

The soft wind blows across
  the lively bay as sailing boats
    zigzag merrily here and there
      their colourful sails fill:
till they return home at sunset
all happy and content.

seafree verse

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Beryl Edmonds

August 8, 2021 at 2:33 AM

Lovely words sailing across the sea to me Victor in a beautiful free verse… Belle

Eve Roper

August 7, 2021 at 9:15 PM

a serene poem, Victor. I would love to be on a boat and feel the breeze and smell the scent of the water.

Ann Gilmour

August 7, 2021 at 9:00 AM

your imagerie has taken me sailing on that azure blue sea, such a lovely way to spend a day ~ thank you Victor, with kindest thoughts Ann xx

Joanna Daniel

August 7, 2021 at 6:32 AM

Love the picture of sailing you describe so beautifully with your well woven words, Victor:)

Anne-Lise Andresen

August 7, 2021 at 2:40 AM

- I have a view to the sea ... and there have been many sailboats this summer ... it looks so peaceful ... a lovely poem, Victor :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Evelyn Judy Buehler

August 6, 2021 at 10:14 AM

With the fine imagery of this verse, one can practically taste the salty breeze and see the colorful sailboats going by. This happy poem conjures pleasant sensations. Best wishes. :)

Sotto Poet

August 6, 2021 at 9:03 AM

What a lovely opportunity to enjoy a sunny day, Victor! The hues are vibrant and ideal for the setting.

Alexis Y.

August 6, 2021 at 6:27 AM

Wow! Victor, You've penned such a lovely serene write. I've only gone sailing a few times; each time was an amazing experience. I enjoyed the view:-) Alexis

Vijay Pandit

August 6, 2021 at 5:26 AM

Lovely hues, Victor. A beautiful write.

Kim Rodrigues

August 6, 2021 at 3:15 AM

Bothe the sails and the sailors too :)

Delice Arleen Skelly

August 6, 2021 at 2:45 AM

Watching people sailing is always uplifting, a fine sight. Unfortunately, I am a poor sailor I go pea green as soon as I set foot on a craft....Delice