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The soft wind blows across the lively bay as sailing boats zigzag merrily here and there their colourful sails fill: till they return home at sunset all happy and content.

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Beryl Edmonds

Date: 8/8/2021 2:33:00 AM

Lovely words sailing across the sea to me Victor in a beautiful free verse… Belle

Eve Roper

Date: 8/7/2021 9:15:00 PM

a serene poem, Victor. I would love to be on a boat and feel the breeze and smell the scent of the water.

Ann Gilmour

Date: 8/7/2021 9:00:00 AM

your imagerie has taken me sailing on that azure blue sea, such a lovely way to spend a day ~ thank you Victor, with kindest thoughts Ann xx

Joanna Daniel

Date: 8/7/2021 6:32:00 AM

Love the picture of sailing you describe so beautifully with your well woven words, Victor:)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/7/2021 2:40:00 AM

- I have a view to the sea ... and there have been many sailboats this summer ... it looks so peaceful ... a lovely poem, Victor :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 8/6/2021 10:14:00 AM

With the fine imagery of this verse, one can practically taste the salty breeze and see the colorful sailboats going by. This happy poem conjures pleasant sensations. Best wishes. :)

Sotto Poet

Date: 8/6/2021 9:03:00 AM

What a lovely opportunity to enjoy a sunny day, Victor! The hues are vibrant and ideal for the setting.

Alexis Y.

Date: 8/6/2021 6:27:00 AM

Wow! Victor, You've penned such a lovely serene write. I've only gone sailing a few times; each time was an amazing experience. I enjoyed the view:-) Alexis

Vijay Pandit

Date: 8/6/2021 5:26:00 AM

Lovely hues, Victor. A beautiful write.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 8/6/2021 3:15:00 AM

Bothe the sails and the sailors too :)

Delice Arleen Skelly

Date: 8/6/2021 2:45:00 AM

Watching people sailing is always uplifting, a fine sight. Unfortunately, I am a poor sailor I go pea green as soon as I set foot on a craft....Delice

Tom Cunningham

Date: 8/6/2021 1:53:00 AM

A lovely way to spend a summers day Victor. Tom

Anitha Jayasankar

Date: 8/6/2021 12:42:00 AM

A lovely write, colourful and apt for the picture Victor... God bless... ~ Ani