Notes About The Poem

Written 22 June 2025 for Visions of a Vignette 2 Poetry Contest sponsored by Nette onclaud

Sailboat


                                                    Sailboat

                                                       sailor
                                            hurled by wild winds 
                                               on the deep sea
                                            in awe calls for relief
                                        from men and the heaven,
                                                 but in vain.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Dietrich Avatar
June 23, 2025 at 1:33 PM
I really like this. I was thinking Sailboat needed to be the first line of the poem, but i might be wrong about that. In any case, a great poem.
Guptar Avatar
June 24, 2025 at 11:19 AM
Thanks for appreciating the above write. Hope it will be ok provided it relates to sailboat. Cheers
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