Sailboat

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Written 22 June 2025 for Visions of a Vignette 2 Poetry Contest sponsored by Nette onclaud

Sailboat sailor hurled by wild winds on the deep sea in awe calls for relief from men and the heaven, but in vain.

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/23/2025 1:33:00 PM

I really like this. I was thinking Sailboat needed to be the first line of the poem, but i might be wrong about that. In any case, a great poem.

Krishnanand Guptar
Date: 6/24/2025 11:19:00 AM

Thanks for appreciating the above write. Hope it will be ok provided it relates to sailboat. Cheers