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Sailboat

Simple ways Are always best If you Live you life Best you know how Otherwise All is lost Tomorrow

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M. L. Kiser

Date: 4/10/2019 7:57:00 PM

You pen quite a profound truth. Well done.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/10/2019 5:17:00 PM

a metaphorical acrostic for one sailing through life!! Nice, Allen. Line 4, small typo.

Allen Beilschmidt Sr.
Date: 4/10/2019 6:17:00 PM

Thank you Andrea

Heidi Sands

Date: 4/9/2019 7:01:00 PM

I agree with this and happy to be led to it. Simplicity is the best. Well done :)

Allen Beilschmidt Sr.
Date: 4/9/2019 10:12:00 PM

Thank you Hedi

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 4/9/2019 6:34:00 PM

good words to ponder.

Allen Beilschmidt Sr.
Date: 4/10/2019 6:17:00 PM

Thanks Richard