Sail On Colors

On wooden bridge to lone boat I'll run,
sail on colors of rising sun.

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April 28, 2019
Syllable count : 9,8.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Dietrich Avatar
May 11, 2019 at 2:44 PM
So pretty, Subimal. Congrats on the fine win.
Marcum Wong Avatar
May 8, 2019 at 10:09 PM
Splendid Crystalline Subimal! Deserving accolades for your First Place win! : ) xxoo
Agustin Avatar
May 7, 2019 at 6:15 AM
Wow! Congratulations! God bless you.
Andresen Avatar
May 5, 2019 at 12:54 PM
- Congratulations, Subimal :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
May Avatar
May 5, 2019 at 9:37 AM
Love the second line Subimal..Congrats on your win..
Andresen Avatar
April 29, 2019 at 12:05 PM
- Sounds perfect, Subimal :) - Good luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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