Sail Away

Sail away beyond the bay Horizon's tinged, break of day Wind springs up, white sails flare ~ Blue skies and sea, Creation's shared

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Caren Krutsinger

Date: 12/17/2021 7:59:00 AM

a sweet tribute to our friend, the sea

Heidi Sands

Date: 12/12/2021 2:56:00 PM

Very nice to see tonight. :)

Gershon Wolf
Date: 12/12/2021 6:27:00 PM

Glad to provide some small semblance of a pleasant vision. :) gw

Valsa George

Date: 12/12/2021 12:17:00 AM

It is simply lovely ! Beautiful images !

Gershon Wolf
Date: 12/12/2021 6:28:00 PM

Thank you for delightful comment, Valsa! :) gw

Eve Roper

Date: 12/11/2021 9:50:00 PM

Images created by our Creator always amazing, and He is very giving, He knows what we desire. Love the write

Gershon Wolf
Date: 12/12/2021 6:29:00 PM

Thank you so much for your pleasing comments, Eve. Season's best, Gershon

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 12/11/2021 9:34:00 PM

Such beautiful words and imagery comprise this poem, Gershon. Very nice!

Gershon Wolf
Date: 12/12/2021 6:27:00 PM

Thanks for the sweet comment, Evelyn. :) gw

L Milton Hankins

Date: 12/11/2021 9:29:00 PM

I love the ocean...the smell of it, the feel of it, the expanse of it. You are right up my alley when you write about the sea, gw.

Gershon Wolf
Date: 12/12/2021 6:30:00 PM

The sea -- the best place to be. Love the smell of it. :) gw