Sail

         Sail
             open
                 on the boat
                      ready to cross
             the furthest oceans
                      to discover 
                 you and me
              to love
            us

adventureallusionblessingdedicationdestinyninette

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Sara Kendrick

November 28, 2023 at 4:56 AM

WoW!! Excellent shape for this one. Way to go. Thank you for sharing it with us and for dropping by my page with congratulations on my POTD. Sara K

Maria Fernandez-Garcia

November 28, 2023 at 5:53 AM

Good afternoon Sara. Thank you very much for stopping by and your comment. Have a nice dayxxx

Sotto Poet

November 21, 2023 at 4:09 PM

The eloquence and delicacy of your words were truly remarkable. Your shape poem was exceptional, displaying an exquisite Ninette. I am thoroughly impressed and acknowledge your talent. Thanks for your kind words on my poem( Divorce) I really appreciate it, Maria.

Maria Fernandez-Garcia

November 22, 2023 at 1:09 AM

Good morning Sotto. Thank you so much for reading me and for your lovely comment. Have a great day!