Said Love

Love!
Without mines,
without yours,
No wait!
Without the mingling of mines and yours,
an emptiness.
Love is indeed a divine secret.
© Al. Juman   4/21/2016

12th gradeboydepressiongirlfree verse

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Pandita Sietesantos

July 19, 2018 at 10:52 AM

Truly love is a divine secret - a few of us have been blessed to experience it while others find it elusive. And it is often so difficult to figure out - is it real, is it lasting, etc...? This is such an exceptional, thought-provoking piece that you have excellently penned, my friend! Love it! Hugs. Pandita

Al Juman

July 20, 2018 at 10:09 PM

Thank you my sweet dear ----- appreciate that

Susan Ashley

July 10, 2018 at 10:31 PM

A divine secret, indeed! Al, I love your playful but deeply meaningful wordplay in your divine poem of love's ultimate gifts of intimate passion's beauty. Wondrous words of wisdom in so few lines. Warmest wishes my friend.. ~Susan

Al Juman

July 11, 2018 at 9:56 PM

Thank you my dear --you are most kind

Faraz Ajmal

July 9, 2018 at 4:16 PM

Ahh, you have said so much in just a few words, I really enjoyed reading this wonderful poem of yours

Al Juman

July 9, 2018 at 11:15 PM

Thank you my friend

Haley Fisher

July 8, 2018 at 5:32 PM

I really like this poem. Made me think. So true need the mingling of both.

Al Juman

July 9, 2018 at 11:05 PM

thank you sweetheart -- I love that you love that

Laura Leiser

July 8, 2018 at 3:50 PM

Beautiful meaning with such few well chosen words! Love this poem, Al! :)

Al Juman

July 9, 2018 at 11:06 PM

THank you my love you are my special girl

Darlene De Beaulieu

July 6, 2018 at 10:15 AM

Hello Al Juman yes without the mingling of mines and yours is emptiness. It is better to be in a relationship. have a nice day my friend.

Al Juman

July 9, 2018 at 11:00 PM

thank you sweetheart

Lyric Man

July 3, 2018 at 12:01 AM

Hi Al.. I loved reading your poem this evening with a delightful bedtime tea. I look forward to reading more of your creative works tomorrow.. sleep well!

Al Juman

July 3, 2018 at 10:27 PM

Thanks my friend do appreciate that

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