Said Love

Love! Without mines, without yours, No wait! Without the mingling of mines and yours, an emptiness. Love is indeed a divine secret. © Al. Juman 4/21/2016

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Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 7/19/2018 10:52:00 AM

Truly love is a divine secret - a few of us have been blessed to experience it while others find it elusive. And it is often so difficult to figure out - is it real, is it lasting, etc...? This is such an exceptional, thought-provoking piece that you have excellently penned, my friend! Love it! Hugs. Pandita

Al Juman
Date: 7/20/2018 10:09:00 PM

Thank you my sweet dear ----- appreciate that

Susan Ashley

Date: 7/10/2018 10:31:00 PM

A divine secret, indeed! Al, I love your playful but deeply meaningful wordplay in your divine poem of love's ultimate gifts of intimate passion's beauty. Wondrous words of wisdom in so few lines. Warmest wishes my friend.. ~Susan

Al Juman
Date: 7/11/2018 9:56:00 PM

Thank you my dear --you are most kind

Faraz Ajmal

Date: 7/9/2018 4:16:00 PM

Ahh, you have said so much in just a few words, I really enjoyed reading this wonderful poem of yours

Al Juman
Date: 7/9/2018 11:15:00 PM

Thank you my friend

Haley Fisher

Date: 7/8/2018 5:32:00 PM

I really like this poem. Made me think. So true need the mingling of both.

Al Juman
Date: 7/9/2018 11:05:00 PM

thank you sweetheart -- I love that you love that

Laura Leiser

Date: 7/8/2018 3:50:00 PM

Beautiful meaning with such few well chosen words! Love this poem, Al! :)

Al Juman
Date: 7/9/2018 11:06:00 PM

THank you my love you are my special girl

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 7/6/2018 10:15:00 AM

Hello Al Juman yes without the mingling of mines and yours is emptiness. It is better to be in a relationship. have a nice day my friend.

Al Juman
Date: 7/9/2018 11:00:00 PM

thank you sweetheart

Lyric Man

Date: 7/3/2018 12:01:00 AM

Hi Al.. I loved reading your poem this evening with a delightful bedtime tea. I look forward to reading more of your creative works tomorrow.. sleep well!

Al Juman
Date: 7/3/2018 10:27:00 PM

Thanks my friend do appreciate that